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| Rhetorical techiniques - Antithesis |
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One of the best ways of expressing an idea is to immediately contrast it with its opposite, a rhetorical technique whose 'fancy' name is Antithesis, but which I simply call 'Opposition'. When two contrasting ideas are deliberately placed next to each other (especially if the same grammatical structure is used), it produces clarity, balance, and emphasis. And all of these help make your point memorable (which is the whole point, after all!). Think of Martin Luther King's "I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will be judged not by the color of their skin but by the content of their character." Developing contrasts is an extremely powerful way to show how one idea differs from another (e.g. an effective way to emphasise the 'beautiful serenity of peace' is to contrast it directly with the 'ugly chaos of war'). All languages have 'natural' opposites in their vocabularies. In the USA, adolescents studying for the antonym section of their SAT learn to match words to their opposites. Many words have 'natural' opposites, such as old/new, up/down, hot/cold, brave/cowardly, etc. We are so familiar with this that we even attribute an opposite to many words where one doesn't exist in a literal case, e.g. dog/cat, sun/moon, winter/summer. Take the examples below, which all use direct, 'natural' opposites:
However, Opposition doesn't have to use exact opposites; it is just as effective when using contrasts. In the examples below victory/celebration and party/freedom aren't opposites, as live/perish and brothers/fools aren't:
Many examples of Opposition use both opposites and contrasts:
Like chiasmus, anaphora and the rule of threes, Opposition is a favorite rhetorical technique of President Obama. Note that in three of the five examples below,he uses the word 'not' as in "not this .... but that", e.g. "not just with missiles and tanks, but ......":
Let's look at how you can use this in business presentations. Business example 1: If you were trying to persuade people of the need to improve quality, you might want to say something like, "It's not just about price any more, its about quality." In looking at how this can be adapted using antithesis, we can see that 'price' and 'quality', while not opposites, are certainly contrasts. So if we introduce two verbs that are opposites, we'll have a nice contrasts/opposites balance as in many of the examples above. The first verb that might spring to mind when thinking of price might be 'reducing', which we would naturally oppose with 'increasing.' But 'increasing' quality isn't grammatically correct; we would talk more about 'raising' quality. The opposite of this is 'lowering', which can be used with 'price' just as effectively as 'reducing'. So the sentence can easily be changed to "It's not about lowering price any more, it's about raising quality." And hey presto! We have Opposition! Business example 2: You might be trying to persuade people about the need to revisit something that you've tried in the past which failed. The first draft of your presentation might read something like, "What didn't work in the past may now work better than anything else." In using Opposition, we can easily contrast 'past' with either 'present' or 'future', but we also want to introduce two contrasting or opposing verbs. We could say, "What didn't work in the past could well work in the future," but this sounds clumsy. A better version would be, "The things that failed in the past could be the very things that succeed in the future." Business example 3: Let's say you're recalling some painful actions the company had to take in the previous year and your first draft contains the sentences, "We closed a factory, reduced spending across the company and suffered redundancies. We didn't want to do this, but we had no choice.” It's a simple matter to change the second sentence so that it reads, "We closed a factory, reduced spending across the company and suffered redundancies. None of this was welcome, but all of it was necessary." Business example 4: A delegate at one of my seminars recently was giving a presentation which had the objective of persuading the audience that the economic growth of China was an opportunity rather than a threat. This was obviously tailor made for Opposition, in that it was all about two contrasting ideas. After careful revision we came up with the concluding words: "I want you to see the Chinese not as enemies, but as friends; not as importers but as exporters; not as producers but as consumers. Above all, I want you to see China not as a threat, but as an opportunity."
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